You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
explain why you want to work in the compan's head office for six months
say how your work could be done while you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Sir,
I am writing to humbly ask for a six months temporary transfer to the company's head office in Italy. As the branch head of marketing, this will give me the ample opportunity to learn from the team of experts scheduled to mentor staff at the headquarters from 1st June to 24th December 2019. I believe on my return, the knowledge gained will be of immense benefit to the branch inline with our "train the trainer policy"
Mr Jude Ofi, my deputy is well capable to stand in as the acting head of department during this period. I did brief him on this and he has promised to leave up to expectation. He was in charge of the department last year during my annual leave and he did very well. In case of emergency, I can always be reached on my mobile and email.
I respectfully solicit your assistance in this regard, as I promise to be a good ambassador of the branch. I would be grateful if my request is given a favourable consideration.
Please accept the assurances of my highest regards.
Yours Faithfully
Precious Ifidon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to humbly ask for a six mon...
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Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onths temporary transfer to the companys head office in Italy. As the branch head...
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Line 8, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t the assurances of my highest regards. Yours Faithfully Precious Ifidon
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Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y highest regards. Yours Faithfully Precious Ifidon
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6329787234 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79519631754 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1241498936 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109183746953 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456914091816 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637826563896 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474402189848 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043391514067 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.