Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
Nowadays, the parenting topic has been an issue spoken by many people. I believe that the school should include this topic as a compulsory subject, so that student acquire parenting basic skill in term of effective communication and upbringing method.
parenting should be taught at the school since the youngster uses up more time in the school rather than in the house. For instance, they spend more than 7 hours a day studying in school. Hence, they would have sufficient time to learn and practice it in school. moreover, if parenting is taught at the school, the student will follow the teacher's instruction effectively because they do not want to have a low mark on the subject.
In my opinion, effective communication is a basic knowledge that should be obtained by young people since they will be a parent in the future. The research has been proved that the parent who has the ability to communicate effectively more often has a good relationship with their children compared to who do not master effective communication skill. Furthermore, the role of the parent in every society not only as of the person that gave birth to the children, but they are also a companion and a teacher their children.
In conclusion, I agree that parenting is necessary to be taught to the children since it would prepare them to be a good parent in the future. moreover, I believe the good parent ideally should have the ability to communicate and to educate their children effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parenting
... communication and upbringing method. parenting should be taught at the school since th...
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Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...ime to learn and practice it in school. moreover, if parenting is taught at the school, ...
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Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...the school, the student will follow the teachers instruction effectively because they do...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'basic knowledge'.
Suggestion: basic knowledge
... my opinion, effective communication is a basic knowledge that should be obtained by young people...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...ionship with their children compared to who do not master effective communication s...
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Line 6, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...them to be a good parent in the future. moreover, I believe the good parent ideally shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87351778656 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7826592252 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501976284585 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2062308292 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.090909091 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324829064928 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125450808102 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862830304272 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199767131931 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838021455718 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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