Imitating celebrities in sports and movies is good or bad
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of the people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals that the effect of celebrities in the advertisements has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. I strongly opine that it is beneficial and also create the problems for the peoples. The reasons related to it as followed as;
To began with the advantages of celebrities doing work in the sports advertisement and in other things. When the celebrities do any things in his life the fans of the celebrities are also do the same thing in her life. It is good if they adopt good things. Like if the celebrities do any social useful works and the people are also doing the social works in their life then it is good for them.
After that there are so many peoples who copy their celebrities fully. They do not know that this is good for them or not. Like the celebrities wear the expensive cloths and live their life very richly because they have too much money and they get everything in their life without any difficulty. The peoples are also wanted to live the life of their celebrities and they lost everything from his life.
In conclusion we can say that there are lots of things the celebrities do in their life and it is the responsibility of the peoples that they do not copy the celebrities like madly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ntages of celebrities doing work in the sports advertisement and in other things. When...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...orts advertisement and in other things. When the celebrities do any things in his li...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...fe the fans of the celebrities are also do the same thing in her life. It is good ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot copy the celebrities like madly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.608 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6444689448 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.580463131201 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9537055694 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166515672287 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075868866696 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505288306805 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104463602427 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578710906679 0.0609392437508 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.5310837438 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.32886699507 82% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 55.0591133005 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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