You and your family are moving to another country, and you are looking for rented accommodation there.
Write a letter to a property agent. in your letter
- Introduce yourself and your family
- Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find
- Give your preference for the location of the accommodation.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to request a consultation to find an accommodation in toronto, Canada, for me and my family as we will move there in three months.
Allow me to introduce myself, my name is truong Nguyen and I am the second child in my family. I will be moving to toronto and settle there with my parents and my younger brother. we have been living in Vietnam for over 30 years and this is a very big decision for us to immigrate to a foreign country and change our lives.
my choice of accommodation is simple. my family and I are only looking for a standard apartment to live in. if the apartment has a living room, a kitchen, a bathroom, and two bedrooms, it will be perfect for us. we will be even happier if it has a balcony to hang our clothes.
I have done my research and found that Westside is very close to the center of the city and its quiet neighborhood is absolutely great because my parents cannot stand too much noise. Moreover, the area is surrounded with many amenities so it would be convenient living there.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
truong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...etter to request a consultation to find an accommodation in toronto, Canada, for me and my famil...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...with my parents and my younger brother. we have been living in Vietnam for over 30...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...oreign country and change our lives. my choice of accommodation is simple. my f...
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Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... my choice of accommodation is simple. my family and I are only looking for a sta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46634615385 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59262135029 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605769230769 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2466895813 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4166666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151983287454 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626856140643 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584977680623 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891378216324 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597661687318 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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