It is important to construct common area such as parks, playgrounds and squares in all town and cities. Do you agree or disagree?
it has been a controversial issue of whether or not to construct many common areas like parks, playgrounds, and squares across cities. while many people claim that it is more beneficial to invest the government's resources on citizen's healthcare, I am personally convinced that those constructions are needed to achieve a decent standard of life.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that some of the recreation venues, for instance, public parks are often the scene of many crimes, especially, prostitution or drug trafficking. The reason for this is not only because those parks are massively constructed in general which merely lacks supervision all the time, but they are also likely to fail under pitch darkness at nights, encouraging the criminal group to commit crimes. therefore, it is believed that there will be more beneficial to society if the government subsidize for the health care system instead.
On the other hand, I would argue that the advantages of having common places outweigh its drawbacks. one of the primary reasons for this is that the living standards of rural habitats will be increasing. As a matter of fact, more and more people are living in apartments rather than private housings owing to their affordable prices; those people, therefore, have fewer opportunities to give access to the natural environment to breathe fresh air and revitalize their souls. Another reason worth mentioning is that those common places are considered as a meeting place where people can socialize make new friends. With the rapid development of the technology era, people are seduced by intriguing gadgets and mobile apps which deter them from making real companies, except for gluing their eyes to the screen. By establishing more public parks with recreational activities could enhance human's social interaction accordingly.
In conclusion, while this issue remains hotly debated with each side, as the aforementioned reasons above, I am in favour of there are more advantages to society as a whole if more common places are constructed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, therefore, while, except for, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25227963526 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87151529616 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61094224924 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.7653453888 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0877498548367 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368199642613 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706594646176 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636369337842 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636775859278 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.