Some people are born to be leaders, while others believe leadership can be learnt.
Discuss both views and give opinion
Some individuals contend that leaderships are endowed to certain people and it is tough for other to gain leadership skills while others argue that training would enable a person to become a leader. From my perspective, I totally agree with the latter idea.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that there are several inhabitants having particular traits which allow them to be an outstanding leader. It is said that an up-and-coming leader is one of the most confident members in a team. Such an individual is capable of conveying feelings without reticence, which is extremely beneficial to minimize barriers among other people. Another traits that shapes a phenomenal leader is a decisive characteristic. With the capacity of determining a chance of success of a situation, a potential leader tends to make precise decisions, generating a high rate of achieving numerous accomplishments for the group. An ordinary person, therefore, who are devoid of aforementioned traits is hardly a decent leader.
On the other hand, it is true that knowledge acquisition can help a human become an excellent leader. In order to lead a team to attain a specific goal, it is immensely essential for one to have a good grasp of the field that the team is working on. By accumulating knowledge and participating in manifold training programs, a prospective leader could gain utilitarian experience, contributing to driving a team towards success. For example, Cong Phuong, a ubiquitous football player of the Vietnam nation team, was not a proficient athlete when he was 18, and thus few people knew his name in 2017. However, practicing football skills on a regular basis has allowed him to become one of the most talented players and he is now a successful team leader who is respected by both his colleagues and fans.
In conclusion, although there are several potential people who have capacity to become a competent leader without being trained, it is possible for one to be given a highest position of a group if he or she make sufficient strenuous efforts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...ighest position of a group if he or she make sufficient strenuous efforts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03519061584 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02288436961 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571847507331 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1626307299 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.642857143 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11663049187 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373205865642 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551533664739 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893607449861 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539082353084 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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