the surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers ,artists or the scientist but by the general welfare of the people.
The statement contends that the surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers ,artists or the scientist but by the general welfare of the people.
I agree insofar and support the statement that the best indicator of a great nation be the general welfare of the people ,and this part question that how the people in the surrounding to us live?
What is the happiness and the health factor of the people for that nation?Providing answers to the question i will provide three reasons that support the issue and the one reason against the issue.
Firstly , leaders of a particular nation should be well aware of the citizens currently living in the country.The government should try to get more involve with the citizens and try to solve the problems happening in the country.As if the citizens of the particular nation are not satisfied by the living resources that will lead to more number of citizens travelling to the other countries for gaining more number of resources and developing a better future .So government should act decisively and solve each and every differences in the country and that will directly tend to increase in the welfare of its citizens and that nation might get a tag for the on elf the best places in the world to live .This indirectly helps in the economic development of the country.
For example if we take USA more and more number of people go there to increase their living standars and also getting a good amount of education.
Secondly, government should also focus on the employment rate of the citizens ,which also determines the fortune level if the country and which can lead to the better welfare of the people .Try to provide more and more resources to the people which helps in presenting the innovative things across the factor .Also more the employment ration more is the development more the tag of a great nation.Should government try to improve by creating more number of organizations which helps in direct contact to citizen for resolving a number of problems created?Yes, every city should have a governmental organization which directly relates to the problem of the citizens,and that organization to the direct government.
Thirdly ,Should government only work for getting a tag of a great nation for a particular country?No the major aim of the country is solely on the hands of the people .As we say in the democratic government that the government is only for the people ,by the people and of the people .Also some agencies should work on increasing the development for all the age group of people without getting biased as every group has a unique and an experienced amount of knowledge.For example ,a 12th science student can help in developing new ideas and an 60 year age group people help in determing the effectiveness of the ideas by their experience.The citizens can also breakdown the government if they are willing to do.So they form the important aspect of the nation.
On the contrary side,acheivement of the rulers also takes place while comparing two nation competing for the tag of a great nation as how much has the ruler gained can sometimes helps in the economic development of the country and their rules over other countries .We take an example of napoleon who ruled over the world and helped his nation for their own development.
Also comes the place of the scientist, they describes the innovations taking place in the country ,and also describe the level of knowledge in the country ,for particular innovations taking place.
AND going through artists they describe the aesthetic work happening in the country and also helps in globalizing country across the globe.
In the sum i would like to conclude that general welfare of people is more compared to the achievements of the rulers,scientist and the artists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 94.0 58.6224719101 160% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3201.0 2235.4752809 143% => OK
No of words: 650.0 442.535393258 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92461538462 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04926703274 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82112975657 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.389230769231 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 997.2 704.065955056 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 23.0359550562 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 252.153370618 60.3974514979 417% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 291.0 118.986275619 245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.0909090909 23.4991977007 251% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.21951772744 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.97078651685 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 46.0 7.80617977528 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197141479935 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141964965946 0.0831039109588 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.239349706928 0.0758088955206 316% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141964965946 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.239349706928 0.0667264976115 359% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.3 14.1392134831 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 48.8420337079 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 12.1743820225 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.6 11.2143820225 228% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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