You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say
– What is the reason for your leaving?
– What do you plan to do?
– Where and when will you meet your friend to discuss it?
Dear Joe,
Hopefully, you and your family doing well. I am very sorry to say that i am quitting my job and planning to return home next week. my apologies for not being in touch, but i am making for it via this letter; atleast i hope so.
To begin with, I am going to resign my job due to the heavy workload in the office. this makes me very stress and creates mental pressure. Because of this health-related problems, i did not visit my parents yet.
Moreover, I have a plan to start a new browsing center with 10 computers in my hometown. there is an empty land besides of my house so it will be very useful to me to initiate my business there.
Lastly, i would like to discuss my ideas with you by coming Monday at the library. I am hoping this letter finds you safe and sound. do get back to me, whenever you had a chance. Talk to you soon.
Thanks,
Aarthi
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| 2019-07-18 | AarthiJK | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...oing well. I am very sorry to say that i am quitting my job and planning to retu...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
... and planning to return home next week. my apologies for not being in touch, but i...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y apologies for not being in touch, but i am making for it via this letter; atlea...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... making for it via this letter; atleast i hope so. To begin with, I am going ...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er; atleast i hope so. To begin with, I am going to resign my job due to the h...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ue to the heavy workload in the office. this makes me very stress and creates mental...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ecause of this health-related problems, i did not visit my parents yet. Moreov...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...enter with 10 computers in my hometown. there is an empty land besides of my house so...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...initiate my business there. Lastly, i would like to discuss my ideas with you...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Do
...g this letter finds you safe and sound. do get back to me, whenever you had a chan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, lastly, moreover, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21428571429 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30743646468 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678571428571 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5852631954 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198097115685 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758867275148 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786136355892 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119257988068 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963702236838 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.