Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these Views and give your own opinion.
People believe that there should be same penalties for particular types of crimes. However, other people of the society debates that the situation, the motivation factor for committing such crimes should also be taken into consideration when the punishment is declared. In my opinion both of these views are important.
Some persons believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. It is important because it maintains uniformity and transparency in Law and Order department. Th fact that there is a fixed punishment for a certain criminal activity in a society means that cases will be solved in a more faster and efficient way. According to reports published by International Journal 2018 Countries which have fixed punishment for crimes like Rape have much less cases compared to countries which does not have fixed punishments for Rape.
Others, however, argue that each case being unique. The circumstances of each case being different. Factors such as circumstances of crime, motivation Factor for the crime should be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. It is important in a certain way. Because all the crimes are not committed for the same reason. People should look into depth and details of each case before the punishment is given. It is to protect the innocent. This separates the person from History Cheaters. As for example, A murderer who has committed crime in self defence cannot be compared to other Murderers who have committed their crimes for materialistic products.
In my opinion, both these views are correct. Uniformity of Law and Order department is important so that proper Law and Order is maintained, but we as Human beings should also consider the factors that made someone to committ crime so that in future such events can be Foreseen ,so that, it does not happen again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, as for, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10561056106 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72422203628 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508250825083 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.7481037045 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9444444444 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.550684533643 0.244688304435 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170667103496 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162829521221 0.0667982634062 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336506820002 0.151304729494 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153633223967 0.056905535591 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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