Do the advantages of eating more fast food outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, fast food is often chosen rather than traditional meals pursuant to the pressure from work, family, time and money. consuming fast food would introduce both merits and demerits, but it is clear that the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits. There are some minor advantages to ready-made meals. One of the greatest advantages of junk food is low cost. junk food is much cheaper than homemade meals and a dine-in restaurant, and it also contains an abundance of calories. another benefit of processed food is its convenience. processed food restaurants appear almost everywhere and it takes only a few minutes waiting. On the other hand, prepared food has two major drawbacks that can make the profits meaningless. Firstly, consuming prepared food can have an adverse impact on the cardiovascular and digestive system. Pre-cooked food will create spikes of sugar intake that can create problems with the insulin response, increasing the risk of diabetes, weight gain, and insulin resistance. another effect of pre-cooked food is the loss of the family tradition of eating together. By way of illustration, many children prefer eating at junk food branches with friends, not with their family, this could also decrease the amount of time the whole family actually gather. In conclusion, despite the advantages that junk food brings, it still does more harm than good.
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...the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits. There are some minor advantages to ready...
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...nd it takes only a few minutes waiting. On the other hand, prepared food has two...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, so, still, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68238408394 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633484162896 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0598664427 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9230769231 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307866901054 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999421917402 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598673065518 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307866901054 0.151304729494 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.