Some people think there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Numerous individuals believe that the noise must be regulated, while, others disagree and consider the freedom of expression should be for everyone. This essay will discuss both the views followed by an opinion.
Regulations on high sounds are vital for the benefits of humans and the related environment. Excess sound is bad and affects the health of an individual, especially to old age people. In addition to that, noise can also disturb people while doing work or studying. In other words, it distracts them from the focus of their jobs. Therefore, strict guidelines on noise are important to maintain a healthy environment in the surroundings. A recent survey from the ecological department revealed that the noise of aeroplanes is killing millions of birds every year. Hence, the concept of control on noise is essential.
However, the liberty of expression is also required to let people feel they have the independence to express, therefore some individuals believe that they should make a high sound if they like to do so. The choice should be in the hands of an individual as it sometimes helps an individual to release the stress of his life. For instance, shouting and encouraging football players in a soccer game often help the audience to forget their worries. Thus, I also believe that choice should be left on the individual whether to make noise or not.
In conclusion, although control on high sound is essential in terms of health safety, I think we should have the right to make a sound when we want to.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96124031008 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72895743855 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3925819185 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4285714286 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263604476923 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729582219319 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602375816671 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142780729374 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039218467901 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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