People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this ? What are the effects on individuals and people around them ?
A good sleep is be all and end all to live a healthy life. Gone are the days when people used to have sufficient sleep without hurries and worries of the life. At present, the number of sleeping hours has been declined noticeably and this has led to many concerns. Here, this essay intends to account for the reasons and results of this phenomena.
There are numerous reasons behind this happening. First and foremost, the trend of working round the clock and using electronic apparatus till late night has surely curtailed the sleeping hours. To illustrate, in this contemporary world, inflation ...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 407 350
No. of Characters: 2080 1500
No. of Different Words: 231 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.492 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.111 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.595 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 151 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 116 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.696 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.032 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.435 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.269 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.427 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.026 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
A good sleep is the be all and end all to live a healthy life....
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Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...nd end all to live a healthy life. Gone are the days when people used to have suffi...
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Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... account for the reasons and results of this phenomena. There are numerous reaso...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n and competitiveness in terms of making more and more achievements are rising sw...
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Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...o fulfil their mighty aspirations. They return back to home till late night since the whole...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s 24✖️7 and therefore they are left with very few hours to sleep. An another reas...
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Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a reason' or 'another reason'.
Suggestion: A reason; Another reason
...are left with very few hours to sleep. An another reason to have less sleep is the habit of spen...
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Line 3, column 714, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...time over electronic devices. Nowadays, most of people keep themselves engaged with mobiles, t...
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Line 5, column 881, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , clear
...nd high blood pressure. It is, therefore,clear that sleeping less invites massive shor...
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Line 5, column 902, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun invites is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...e. It is, therefore,clear that sleeping less invites massive short comings for indiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28746928747 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.782850053 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572481572482 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3181212733 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5652173913 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6956521739 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21739130435 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286915537772 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803842926804 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456024412224 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165521659123 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325585407687 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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