Dog is a pet animal and known as man’s best friend. A trained dog living in the family becomes loving friend of the humans. He guards home, offices, and man for whole day without getting anything in return. He respects his owner from heart and can guess his/her presence through their smell. Dogs can be of many kinds such as Bull dogs, Blood hounds, Grey hounds, lap dogs, etc. A dog has sharp teeth so that it can eat flesh very easily. It has four legs, two ears, two eyes, a tail, a mouth, and a nose. It is very clever domestic animal and has been proved very useful in catching thieves and criminals. It does so as it has very powerful sense of hearing and smelling. It is loved by the people because of its noble service.
Wild dogs become carnivore however domestic dogs can be omnivore as they can eat bread, rice, fish, meat, etc. It is very intelligent and faithful animal to its owner. Because of their intelligence, they are used by the police and army to smell the traces of criminals and other investigations. Dogs can catch thieves and robbers very easily through smell. A pet dog is considered as the family member and gets lots of love. Pet dogs have been proved a very good friends and Investigators. They are used as security agents to get solutions of problems by the investigation department. They are called as smart animal as they can learn anything through proper training.
- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
- Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the government of richer nation should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such area. 56
- Task 2: Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negativedevelopment?Give reasons for your answ 73
- When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. 67
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Cambridge ielts 5, page 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 613, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eful in catching thieves and criminals. It does so as it has very powerful sense o...
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Line 1, column 679, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...powerful sense of hearing and smelling. It is loved by the people because of its n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58333333333 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43637544234 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56746031746 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.7413053216 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.1666666667 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.11111111111 7.06120827912 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0133542160423 0.244688304435 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00519145526023 0.084324248473 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0116618566215 0.0667982634062 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0115111503304 0.151304729494 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00393955084575 0.056905535591 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.0946893788 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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