Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace, so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples.
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typically day reveals study and employment has been the one of the prominent topic in the contemporary discussion. People have been intrigued to analyze and explain. People have always held some conflicting views on this issue. This essay will discuss the both sides of essay.
Let us take a look of the positive sides of this essay. Firstly doing a part time job with study is a good thing. It is easy and good way to earn some money for student. Some parents cannot have money for her child study so he asks to her children to do part time job so they earn her school fees that is good things. Secondly, when student do part time jobs they know the value of hard work.
Apart from that there are some disadvantage of study and employment. Firstly when student do regular work and study they feel stress which is not god for her health. Secondly, they not spend time on study which effect on the study.
In conclusion it all depends on the student that he do part time jobs with her study or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ve sides of this essay. Firstly doing a part time job with study is a good thing. It is e...
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Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... study so he asks to her children to do part time job so they earn her school fees that i...
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Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... good things. Secondly, when student do part time jobs they know the value of hard work. ...
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Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...t all depends on the student that he do part time jobs with her study or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 1207.87684729 76% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44230769231 5.00649968141 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25115026482 2.71678728327 83% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 379.143842365 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9779381667 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0 104.977214359 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190169418249 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737846400904 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686913415548 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130106930111 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474317825073 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 12.6369458128 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 53.1260098522 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.9458128079 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 11.5310837438 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.32886699507 83% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 55.0591133005 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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