Some people believe that physical fitness of strong individuals and teams is the reason for most sport achievements. Others, however, think that mental attitude is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Achievements in sports have been linked to many factors. While most people suggest that individual's physical fitness is the key to success, I believe that mentality, attitude and mindset of sportsmen are more important to achieve a targeted goal.
On the on hand, it is widely hold idea that individuals and team members physical abilities and robustness certainly can ensure a sporting victory and thus, many people perceive that being physically fit and strong means being undefeated. This is because, certain characteristics of physical advantage such as being fast, firm and tenacious as well as the ability to perform quick and the right movements during the high-pressured and competitive sports events guarantee a win over opponents. Additionally, endurance, strong physical stamina and being active are the strengths of sportsmen to keep and lead any competition and contest.
On the other hand, I would advocate with those who content that mental attitude plays a major role both for individual's and teams in achieving a triumph. Firstly, having a strong team spirit and ones own positive mindset can bring a huge success in every sports as we all have witnessed such cases, for example, football matches where a losing team would finally be able to score a winning goal taking the lead at the very last minute and become the winner. Moreover, self and team encouragement, maintaining a positive attitude and determination to win will absolutely help to push the squad forward and outwit the opposing team no matter how physically developed and well trained they are since sportsmen's strong mentality is the significant factor in determining the success in most unexpected cases.
In conclusion, I would suggest that it is not just sportsmen's physical prowess to assure high-achievements but most of the time, it is the belief and attitude to win and to achieve a high level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'held'.
Suggestion: held
...d goal. On the on hand, it is widely hold idea that individuals and team members ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20261437908 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93117398647 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584967320261 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8391271541 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.888888889 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7777777778 7.06120827912 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252306382825 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105991503556 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616539026092 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147374855454 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517114529076 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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