You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter,
• explain your interest in the course
• describe your problems
• find out if a refund is possible
Dear Sir,
My name is Vishal Bhat, I am working with food organization in England. Recently I saw a notice for a tennis course in the newspaper and I have applied for the same. It is my dream to play tennis on professional scale and this will become true soon I am hopeful.
However, the course duration is of six months and my visa of England will expire in coming month, so it will be difficult for me to complete the course. In addition to that, my wife is pregnant and I need to stay with her to support her emotionally, so I have decided to discontinue the course and stay with her all the time in my home country India.
Furthermore, I course fee was huge amount as per my budget and unfortunately I am unable to continue the course. Plus, I am in dire need of money currently, therefore, I request you to please refund the fee I paid for the course.
I hope you will understand my circumstance and do the needful.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal
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| 2019-07-25 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Vishal Bhat, I am working wit...
^^^
Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and do the needful. Yours sincerely, Vishal
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37640449438 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69246518391 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567415730337 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8946810535 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5555555556 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197738199577 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856380850227 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540337158802 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100808401701 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284703734767 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.