I strongly believe that today our lives are easier than the time when our grandparents lived. My notion will be investigated in this essay with following reasons.
First of all, transportation have improved by developing cars, busses, planes, ships and so on. Improvement in transportation opened the way of the job opportunities because now it is easy to reach a place by public transportations or by private transportation. This is one of the big steps that have made in the pass. Also, it is easier to go to hospitals, schools, markets shortly, everywhere. Therefore, transportation have become a part of the industry and a way of making money so, the burden of unemployment was decreased.
Secondly, communication have got better and better every day and now it is an inseparable part of our lives. I can not imagine a life without cell phones, computers and more importantly internet. By internet, it is so simple to do anything such as money transfer, market shopping, paying bills and more. Moreover, today one can communicate a person in seconds readily by using smart phones even this person is abroad. For example, I studied abroad and it was not a problem to call my parents, that is why I did not feel alone even in the beginning of that period of time. My grandparents say that, in the past it was very difficult to call a place even for an emergency.
Last but not least, economy got better in time. With the increase in the salary of the people, the life standards of everyone has risen. Additionally, people had the chance to catch the life standards of the time. Now, it is not so hard to find a job and earn money. That gives confidence to person to be able to do or buy the things he/she wants and provide to them/their family. Furthermore, social lives of people has been getting better and that provides a happier person. From my window, the happier the person the more successful the person.
As a conclusion, our lives are definitely easier than past because of the reasons I explained. That is why with the improvement of technology, I believe, life will be easier in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: IN_THE_PASSED[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
... is one of the big steps that have made in the passed. Also, it is easier to go to hospitals,...
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Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ommunication have got better and better everyday and now it is an inseparable part of ou...
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Line 5, column 556, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...eel alone even in the beginning of that period of time. My grandparents say that, in the past ...
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Line 7, column 342, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... be able to do or buy the things he/she want and provide to them/their family. Furth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92213458116 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8203325839 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.4545454545 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17453490288 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454099932136 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557772050318 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102958401678 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541957754471 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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