A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening.
Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
explain arrangements you have made for them to have keys and get into the house
tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house
say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening
Dear Ahmad,
It's great to hear from you. I am so excited to see soon. I just wanted to write a quick letter to tell that apparently I will be outside home in the morning until 8 pm. As we discussed last time we spoke, I'm searching for a part-time job and I have some job interviews at that moment. However, I will leave the flat's keys with my neighbor in the next apartment, his name is Ali and he will be available in the morning. His flat number is 45.
As you already know, I'm living in the downtown near The national library on SR road, so, my home is not too far from the train station. I will explain the best method to reach me, once you arrive to SC train station, ask anybody about the downtown bus stop which is beside the train station. take the bus number 3 and ask the driver to drop you in AVR stop. Afterward, walk for 10 min in AS street until you find reach to the national library, my building is directly behind it.
Oh, another think I wanted to mention, I will get back home by 8 pm, so you can take some rest until I come, then we will visit our uncle in his home, then, we will go to the cinema, and finally I will invite to try some Syrian meals in AS restaurant.
I look forward to catching up with you soon.
Thanks
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ahmad, Its great to hear from you. I am so exci...
^^^^
Line 2, column 206, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...pm. As we discussed last time we spoke, Im searching for a part-time job and I hav...
^^
Line 2, column 443, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in the morning. His flat number is 45. As you already know, Im living in the do...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...umber is 45. As you already know, Im living in the downtown near The nationa...
^^
Line 4, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Take
...stop which is beside the train station. take the bus number 3 and ask the driver to ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 210, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'trying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'invite' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: trying
...o the cinema, and finally I will invite to try some Syrian meals in AS restaurant. ...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 253, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...try some Syrian meals in AS restaurant. I look forward to catching up with you s...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k forward to catching up with you soon. Thanks Bilal
^^^^^
Line 10, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o catching up with you soon. Thanks Bilal
^^^^
Line 11, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g up with you soon. Thanks Bilal
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, finally, however, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.10080645161 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14679403665 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604838709677 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.9194311773 44.8134815571 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287888934626 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833057760749 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054181755187 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158688138047 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342195080354 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.5 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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