do you agree or disagree? the internet provides people with valuable information, other think access to so much information creates problems?
Recently, the world has become very technologically advanced, the most important invention is the Internet. Some people believe that the Internet is not a significant invention, however, there is a substantial body of evidence that casts doubt in this belief. From a personal point of view, the Internet is an amazing discovery, given that it has a positive impact on transportation, communication, and education. Below I will strive my supporting points in more detail.
The first and the foremost point, The Internet has a great impact on education, given that it opens a door to a wealth of information. A vivid example can be given to shed a light on what was elaborated above is, schools in California implement the usage of the Internet in all the learning subjects. Furthermore, this approach broad students’ horizon and maximize the potential learning outcomes. Consequently, the Internet has a vast benefit on the education field.
Next, coupled with Internet education, better communication is another benefit of the Internet. In the past, there was no Internet, and people all over the world could not contact each other easily. However, the Internet has made the world a global village; given that by the Internet people can use many Apps such as WhatsApp, and Viber to communicate with anyone at any place of the world; moreover, it is cost-effective. In addition to that, almost all people who access wed have social media accounts. Either on Facebook, Twitter, or Instagram they connect their friends through means of “liking”, “sharing”, or “comments”. Therefore, internet communication has made sure to connect people from two sides of the earth with no problem at all.
Although the previous points are the first ones which cross the mind in a glance, they are not the only reasons available. There is another subtle point that must be born on the mind. The Internet has made transportation easier than before. Provided that people use data connection ability such as GPS to navigate their destinations, they can get where they need to go. Moreover, people can use the Phone App such as Google Maps to know the traffic condition in order to find the best routes to save time and gas. A recent survey conducted by the University of Toronto found that the Internet has reduced the commute time drastically which enhances people’s quality of life. As a result, the internet has vast benefits to our world.
Taking everything into consideration, without a doubt, the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. It is suggested that research and technology continue to develop and expand.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-07-26 | Christine hanna | 90 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2234.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18329466357 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16446100442 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556844547564 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 12.0 3.08781362007 389% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3575116145 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1304347826 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7391304348 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5652173913 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196574370123 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575436967693 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056486880297 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115415499472 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527865255983 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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