Dear Sir,
I am writting this letter to express my dissatifaction about the dinning table which was purchased from your store. This dinning table was damaged at the time of delivery. I visited your store with my husband to buy a dinning table and one representaed showed a varity of them. Me and my husband was really liked one of them of a stone piece with black and white colour. It was a fantastic furniture piece. Immediately , i purchased it. The payment of this item was paid through cheque. The invoice number of this item was abcd123 and promised to be dilver with in 3-4 days. It is perfect combination of value of money and quality.
However, when it arrived at my place, i was totally disappointed as it was broken. To elaborate further, the leg of one chare is broken and having some scratches on the table.Moreover, the dilvery boy is unprofessional.
I would like to change this piece with new one.I had emailed your head of department about my unpleasent experience.
Looking forward for your positive response.
Thaking You.
Savita Pal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...a fantastic furniture piece. Immediately , i purchased it. The payment of this ite...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...antastic furniture piece. Immediately , i purchased it. The payment of this item ...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... However, when it arrived at my place, i was totally disappointed as it was brok...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
... and having some scratches on the table.Moreover, the dilvery boy is unprofessional. ...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... like to change this piece with new one.I had emailed your head of department abo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, really, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86885245902 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79687557754 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628415300546 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5170849127 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5384615385 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0979612645622 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367327261706 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498336988022 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0381601182819 0.12726935374 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285416540111 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.