Most people prefer ready to eat food rather than homemade food now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people are working more and more, for this reason, the majority of the society do not have time to prepare the own food at home. As a consequence, eating at restaurants or buying frozen food are more and more usual. This sort of behaviour are based on necessity and convenience. However, from my point of view, that is not a health choice. Moreover, the budge required for this kind of lifestyle it is another point to be discussed. The purpose of this essay is discuss both health and econominal aspects envolved in this topic.
On the one hand, problems like obesity, which is considered a modern epidemia, is a relevant challenge to health system as well as to governments and society. The increase in calories combined with poor nutritives contents are elements to point out. Usually, restaurants or prepared food from grocery stores, like frozen food, for example, are the classic example of that dangerous combination. People should care about it, not only individually, but as part of a community as well.
One the other hand, it is considered by some that prepared food or restaurants are more convenient and practical while other people support the opinion that it is more expensive to eat this type of food on a regular basis. In fact, food in restaurant or prepared food cost more than a meal prepared at home and that is another matter.
In conclusion, in spite of the lack of time to cook, people should prefer home-cooked food than prepared food or food from restaurants. Considering all the points mentioned, I totally agree with this opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... that is not a health choice. Moreover, the budge required for this kind of lifestyle it ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, sort of, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88805970149 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72318535392 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541044776119 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8499994047 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207601383455 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693093734798 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775312177261 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147537127887 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06706008131 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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