According to some research, the rate of childbirth in the last decades drastically is increased and led to the proportion of young people overcome the proportion of senior citizens. This phenomenon has its benefits and drawbacks that in this essay we scrutinize them.
First of all, it should be considered that if your policies are not planned properly, any advantage can be became a disadvantage for you. For example, the meaning of having more young inhabitants in developing countries such as Britain and France is more workforce which leads to dramatic economic growth. On the other hand, If there is no adequate planning for this new workforce, a further increase in the unemployment rate and the corresponding social problems such as poverty and prostitution is inevitable. One more instance for its advantage, it can be mentioned to have military superiority for society. certainly, the logic behind attacking china with near only 17 million armed soldiers is wholly foolish, even for Russia or the United States.
But, if we have a glance at the future when this population will be retired, it is clearly inevitable that they will impose an enormous economic burden on countries and societies. these expenses which mainly are related to the health and economy sector will force governments to allocate a part of the annual budget for the elderly. subsequently, slow economic growth is caused.
All in all, it can be concluded that having a vast range of young people when is accounted as an astonishing chance for societies that there is proper planning and without it, they are only a great disaster.
- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 73
- Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their was 78
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- The bar graph below shows the number of tourists visiting two different cities by season Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 69
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 266.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06766917293 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84132940836 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 106.607317073 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612781954887 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9133151268 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.545454545 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977534841172 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352780415488 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256200518359 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573032083749 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233637460396 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 40.7170731707 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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