What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented?
We are now living in a generation in which a lot of things are continuously changing, mainly in technology, either newly invented or innovated, these may cause advantages and disadvantages in our lives and in the society. In this essay, I shall explain my personal viewpoint regarding the effects of those inventions in this modern age.
One of the advantages would be the improvement in efficiency of the works and tasks that humans can apply for manufacturing, construction, transportation, and even in household chores. The equipment and devices helps to minimise the timeframe needed to finish the objectives in different industries. Another positive result is the constant focus towards precision to produce an excellent quality of products to be made. The more exact the measurements, the closer that the user will get the desired outcome and of the expected function.
Some of the disadvantages mostly affecting the social and behavioural aspects in the present generation. It can be seen on the Millenials and Gen-Z in whom became more conscious about their status in terms of popularity and acceptance because of the observations on various media platforms. In relation with the issue, the suicidal rate tremendously increasing across the world.
Therefore, balance in everything and more research with the consequences and long-term effect must be studied furthermore for a better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16065690421 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663636363636 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2072809101 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.25397266985 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229240132848 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625910361865 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761278607354 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104872123853 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728413654835 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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