Overpopulation in many countries has made life more difficult in several ways. What are some of the problems caused by overpopulation and what are the possible solutions?
Population explosion has caused numerous issues, namely poverty and pollution in some countries. In my view, governments and individuals should take drastic actions to tackle those problems to improve the life.
To begin with, the poverty in some developing and underdeveloped countries is such a burning issue. With the tremendous growth in population, politicians may impossibly provide adequate food and healthcare to the residents. Furthermore, that the demand for housing is increasing, resulting in the higher living costs creates some difficulties for the low-paid. Consequently, governments should invest money in building affordable houses and educating people to be self-sufficient by feeding cattle or planting vegetables. In terms of health services, not only would modern technology be necessary but there could be some voluntary campaigns take care of the poor as well.
Secondly, that the environment is gradually deteriorating has sparked heated debate. In some densly populated countries, the air and water are heavily polluted due to the emissions from vehicles and factories. Additionally, noise pollution may lead to some mental problems such as stress and depression. As a result, everyone should raise their consciousness about environmental conservation by using public transports and sewage systems. Besides, the governments could impose severe punishment on companies that has contaminated the water or made much noise affecting human life.
To conclude, overpopulation is the primary cause of various problems, including poverty and damaging the environment. Therefore, solutions from both authorities and private citizens are crucial to address them and enhance the quality of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, such as, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.884 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17842980102 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4857570288 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157514022509 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463117809748 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377342796185 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925724578673 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029685016378 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.86 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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