A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
Give information about the flat
Provide any important instructions
Say what he/she should do if there are any problems
Dear Mohan,
Thank you so much for accepting my humble request; without you, it would have a tedious task to find someone faithful. I want to mention some necessary information regarding my flat so that finding my house will be ease for you.
My flat Number is 401 at 7th floor of Vaswani apartment near MG Road, Bengaluru. You won't be having any trouble to find out my flat, as it is one of the famous society, anyways you have google map to get an accurate location.
You need to follow some specific instruction while staying in my flat: you should show up by 12 O'Clock at night; otherwise you have to fill a formality form, collect milk regularly at 6.00 AM, keep the front door always close as recently one robbery case happened and finally please take care of my pet dog.
In case of any emergency situation or any difficulties, either give a ring to me or to the society chief so that you will get help immediately and also never forget to call the police if the situation gets out of control by any means; the police station is just 100 meters away from my apartment.
I will be accompanying you for the first day, and I can't wait to see you here.
Your Friend,
Manas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mohan, Thank you so much for accepting my humbl...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...finding my house will be ease for you. My flat Number is 401 at 7th floor o...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gle map to get an accurate location. You need to follow some specific instruc...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ally please take care of my pet dog. In case of any emergency situation or an...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t 100 meters away from my apartment. I will be accompanying you for the first...
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Line 11, column 57, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...companying you for the first day, and I cant wait to see you here. Your Friend, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, finally, first, if, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46118721461 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40178307859 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671232876712 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.8139323651 44.8134815571 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.125 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 16.8248392259 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232551606258 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121395066675 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805627414532 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104116936521 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215424393452 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.