Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other peole think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
In modern life, disciplines make a harmonious daily life for everyone and we can integrate into society conveniently, such as priority queues, respecting for the elderly, keeping quiet in public. As a result, parents and teachers educate us the importance of obeying rules from childhood. However, strict disciplines have some bad influences on children's growth.
Rules make us a clear distinction between right and wrong and we can have a good breeding to get along with others. When we were young, we didn't understand the consequence of our behaviours. Parents and teachers should use disciplines to limit children's behaviors. Lacking these, they will become spoiled brats who bully at school and use profanity.
However, if adults overemphasize the rules but don't understand the changes, children will become submissive kids like marionettes. Because of the obedience, they lack their self-consciousness as well as only follow others mind. When they enter the workforce, they can't deal with job matters by theirselves. Lacking the abilities of independent decision, planning and coördinateness, they are unlikely to achieve success in their careers.
In my view, strict disciplines will limit children's growth so that they can't mature authentically. Relying on others usually is the main defect of the strict rules. Children are not dare to make mistakes because of the punishments. They still keep up the custom in adulthood. They can't arrange their life without domestic help. It's a terrible thing, isn't it? Establishing the strict disciplines stifles problem-solving ability, which are important in their adulthood.
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- Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other peole think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion. 78
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- Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other peole think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion. 56
- Some people think that children should obey rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other peole think that children controlled too much cannot deal with problems themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, well, such as, as a result, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.512 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09606201488 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1827319539 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5555555556 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8888888889 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15324646299 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503321239383 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430149383812 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906603716433 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116159245452 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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