Today, many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and less time on outdoor sports. Why, is it a positive or negative development.
Nowadays technologies day by day increasing with many other gadgets it is kind of attraction especially for children while some people believe the good result to get from his child other would say wrong with them but I would be accounting my points in this essay.
First of all of the adolescent playing game on a computer of enjoyment, not any type of tension those who are freely play the games. On the day of life for children, many other activities do with their parents or family members getting happy. However, not only games but also child find out with the help of the internet for his study purpose or extra curriculum from there. computer device it is robot means anything which we have to want it easily can provide with time to take but very friendful.
On the Otherside those who prefer to continue more than hours to seating in front of a computer Moreover, bed impact on his health and eyes it also drawback. For example, recently according to media PUBG games certainly famous all over the world but in the background, many children take catastrophic action due to this games means mentally loss and addicted. The government did action against this game, In Delhi, one child killed his family due to this game.
To sum up, my above points computer has many advantages for us but that's not mean to more time spent with it after the end of day effect on health especially of child dangerous these days children easily understood electrical gadgets so parents would take responsibilities against on his children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, kind of, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74812030075 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51085325746 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597744360902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3170462045 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7777777778 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16542164893 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728759275987 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372459939667 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103848045602 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440946336291 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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