Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays opportunities are increasing so some people believe that its good thing but others say a bad thing. but I agree with this statement because in competition era people have a lot of choices are available to do something.
To be with people have the chance to get the result of their efforts. Talk to choices are wide open for all so those who are own respected area decide and move that area and focus it. it is a flexible thing to do. lets prime example education, shopping, job, travel, food all this stuff much options are open for people so that not confused moving and doing of option. also, competition has increased due to a variety of resources. available also boon in technology good dope to us. the positive impact is people have not unemployment due to the open sky is no limit.
On the other side if opportunities and competition not available in the world we can not imagine our path is locked. people nature and culture wise not much as the growth it feels like orthodox but not any changes from our behavior. For example, i try to understand particular in education students get only one option in science to further study so it is very difficult for all those who not interested in this field particular to do that. that's why option have required for any field.
To sum up choices have required for people because with this option people get the result and also achieve the decided goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... good thing but others say a bad thing. but I agree with this statement because in ...
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Line 2, column 287, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...pping, job, travel, food all this stuff much options are open for people so that not...
^^^^
Line 2, column 369, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ot confused moving and doing of option. also, competition has increased due to a var...
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Line 2, column 432, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Available
...ncreased due to a variety of resources. available also boon in technology good dope to us...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... we can not imagine our path is locked. people nature and culture wise not much as the...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...changes from our behavior. For example, i try to understand particular in educati...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thats
...ed in this field particular to do that. thats why option have required for any field....
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ed in this field particular to do that. thats why option have required for any field....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58893280632 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51491512288 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6723021499 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9285714286 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22305492095 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792350011773 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757403198506 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162935730558 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868137664951 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.