All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults.
What are the reasons for this rise in obesity,
How could it be tackled?
Obesity nowadays has become a number one dilemma and life threaten across the world. A plethora of diseases have accompanied with it. This serious issue impact adults and children productivity and makes them extremely dependent on their families. This essay aims to discuss the reasons of obesity and it will also offer some solutions to mitigate it among the global society.
To begin with, there is no doubt that becoming overweight and obese rely on several factors. First of all, the human being life style. For instance, most of the individuals these days are eating invaluable food via some fast food restaurants due to their tight daily schedule, hence, they claim that they have insufficient times to cook their meal by themselves. Yet, these meals might be considerably cheap and affordable, and served quickly, but unfortunately it’s lacked of some significant healthy ingredient that our body need it. Second of all, low physical activities also is plying a crucial role in gaining high weight. To illustrate, there is a conspicuous link between inactivity and obesity, which means that people who are doing low physical activities such as jogging, walking or cycling are most likely to suffer from getting too much weight in their foreseeable future.
On the flip side there are some ways might alleviate the dangerous influence of obesity. Firstly, increase the public awareness. To put differently, to talk out loud through social media platforms as an example about the dangerous effect of obesity. it’s irrefutable that many people have no adequate data about this disease and how much it costs the government yearly and what are accompanied diseases for obesity. The Minster Of Health in Saudi Arabia for example has recently released a study on obesity. This report has shown the percentage of obese people in Saudi Arabia. Moreover, it also listed some fatal diseases that accompanied with it such as Hypertension, Diabetes, Insomnia and more disease. Such these information was unknown for many people over many years there. Therefore, individuals started to take this issue in their consideration. Secondly, surgical and non-surgical solutions might be effective to overcome such problem. For instance, there are various method indeed participate in lowering people weight. The bariatric surgical procedures is a one of famous example of fighting obesity for ever. Obese patients nowadays resort to such surgical solutions as it very effective settlement for their problem.
To sum up, there are lots of reasons that stand behind obesity such as the wrong life style. However, obesity can be cured by some solutions as surgical intervention or by enhance awareness of the serious problem that accompanied with it.
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Undoubtedly, the obesity has…
Undoubtedly, the obesity has become an increasingly worrying issue in the past few decades. The number of people suffering from the same is increasing at an alarming rate. This essay will discuss various factors that lead to rise in proportion of obese people and there are some steps that can be taken to deal with this issue.
To start with, one of the main reasons that causes obesity in children and adults is their sedentary lifestyle. To explain, juveniles and adults spend most of their time being a couch potato and do nothing for their physical fitness. The potential solution to eliminate obesity due to aforementioned reason is to make a concrete exercising routine and follow it at all costs. Second common reason is their unhealthy diet, these days people avoid cooking healthy meals at home and often eat from fast food restaurants which is highly enriched with fat. This problem can be solved by the government as government can increase the tax on unhealthy and people would stop eating junk food in order to save money.
Another cause of this issue is the expensiveness of sports centers and gyms. To exemplify, it is highly unaffordable for many people to join gyms or other sports. This leaves a huge of number of children and young people unable to perform enough physical activities to reduce weight. This issue can also be tackled if the government takes the responsibility to spend money on sports facilities to make these less costly.
To sum up, the obesity has become an issue that needs quick action. As every problem has a solution, this issue can also be eliminated with strict actions in place. I believe, unless government and people make collective efforts to solve the problem, this issue will remain a matter of concern in near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30663615561 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73089287036 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562929061785 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.7939919296 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.76 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.48 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.96 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214509464102 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546916346986 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339311733757 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119253967998 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494326389878 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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