Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nobody denies that our environment is in a lot of problems, some people think that the main problem we are confronting with is many species of plants and animals no longer exist. I believe the same as others that there are more than that.
In the one hand, the environment changed and it leads to the habitant of some kinds of plants changed. they cannot or hardly grow in the new conditions such as too less water, low humidity and high temperature… animals die because of lack of food, also by human because they take the movement to residential area and looking for food. In additions, because of the dramatic growth of populations today, people open wide their living area to the wild habitat of animal, thus, food sources become more scarce. As a result, many plants and animals have disappeared.
In the other hand, a topic which has been debated for many years is the greenhouse effects. The weather becomes unpredictable because of the earth’s temperature changes and brings natural disasters that kill thousands of people, cattle, other animals, also destroy thousands houses, harvests... many people have died from floods every year in Vietnam, for instance. Furthermore, as economic development as people exploit unlimited from the earth, also, waste are discharged into environment this lead to air, water and soil pollution. there are researches show that million tones of plastic used and plastic trash have been wasted every year, for example. this should be emphasized that the environment is now in serious crucial problems.
In conclusion, there are a lot of major issues about environment and they are included the disappearance of plants and animals. So, for me, the main environmental problems now are in a larger range which have more impacts on the earth.
- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 89
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 61
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes in billions of telephone calls in the uk devided into three categories, from 1995 -2002. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevent. 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05067567568 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70562131263 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4093048015 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152966352942 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541696193621 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504272504683 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115009332289 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677618173178 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.