In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and Internet access. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the third world countries, village people find it difficult to ingress in education due to lack of facilities and infrastructure. Proponents believe that establishing more school along with a capable teacher will eradicate this problem while opponents think of installation of computers with internet services as alternatives. The essay will discuss both the views.
On the one hand, rural communities face difficulty in accessing education easily. this is primarily due to lack of transportation services and focus.Sometimes schools are far away from their houses and there is no better communication services. Besides, teachers are more likely to choose the capital of a country rather than village. They feel less convinces to provide services there due to lack of facilities. but, if a large community is illiterate then it is tough for a country to develop further. teachers are the key to success so more schools are needed to ease the gap.
On the other hand, the establishment of modern devices with internet services can work as alternatives to school and teacher. Some become self-educated without the help of a mentor. this will also help to cope up with the evolving ideas of the modern era in helping to learn technical things.
In conclusion, the rural world is lagging behind in terms of getting proper education mostly in developing countries. Not only the establishment of schools with mentors but also installing computers with internet facilities will help to reduce the gap.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, then, third, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2531120332 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02893195944 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589211618257 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8746840467 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4285714286 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181926425556 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562294641032 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408348851564 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102261027101 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304193785228 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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