Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
In the first half of the twenty first century, visiting pristine places otherwise with adverse conditions has gained a great deal of attention, whether in unbearably hot settings like the Sahara desert or utterly cold locations including the Antarctic. This trend, unquestionably, has merits and demerits for tourists, as is elaborated in this essay.
Unique to remote and undisturbed places, is a first-hand experience of intact and serene natural attributes which broadens one’s horizons when they access to these areas, on the one hand. Being transparent to the tranquil and enchanting ambience, not only can one fill their heart and soul with remarkably unforgettable experience, but also spread the preservation necessity of such regions, as a favorable outcome. Moreover, a lot is comprehended by being dealt with harsh conditions like the scarcity of natural resources, if their community is challenged with natural disasters such as drought, as a salient instance. Thus, it boosts one’s endurance and forbearance when confronting with unpredictable predicaments.
On the other hand, although there is an enthusiasm for disembarking on attractively unreached places for passionate explorers, erratic situations of which they are more likely to get involved with, should not go unnoticed. As far as inclement climatic conditions are considered, the paucity of vital resources of survival including food and water is problematic. Was it not for its harsh freezing weather, without a doubt, the Antarctic would be swamped by a wide assortment of tourists around the globe, earnest to be absorbed by the unimaginable picturesque sceneries. Hence, fervent travelers should bear in mind that heading off to such destinations is more probable to culminate in bereft of stamina and even a death toll in elderly individuals with vulnerable health conditions, in particular.
In way of conclusion, one is capable of grasping valuably far-reaching experiences in undertaking a journey to remotely situated natural attributes, but even then overwhelming conditions including bereft of substantial sustenance for living and erratically demanding conditions, especially for the senior populace, should be thoughtfully be prepared for.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
In the first half of the twenty first century, visiting pristine places other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69552238806 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24790660342 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0372997758 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.454545455 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4545454545 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17681750378 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553125072664 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447550875929 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996193960754 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502937055041 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.06 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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