Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children,while others feel it should be purely optional.
Many schools have implemented compulsory physical activities as part of their curriculum. While some individuals believe it should be rightly so, others feel every child has to choose whether or not to participate. My opinion is that every child should be exposed to some form of sport to encourage the habit of exercising.
One of the reasons some individuals may feel sports should be optional is that some children are bad at sports and might easily get injured doing it. Children should partake in activities that are pleasing to them, instead of wasting time doing what they dislike. An example is a secondary school classmate of mine who was forced to join a football team. He not only played terribly and caused his team to lose, but also ended up getting injured. The pain was severe, so he required admission at a federal hospital in our community where he received treatment for 2 weeks.
However, the importance of sports is to encourage the habit of exercising. Unless these activities are forcefully included, most young people will not exercise. They spend most of their time in front of electronic devices, either watching the television or playing video games. In a recent research conducted by University of Michigan, results showed a significant increase in the number of obese children. The inactivity of children has led to many dying from weight related conditions. A sad victim was my neighbor Uche, who passed away last week from a condition related to sedentary living.
To conclude,although children should be given the chance to pick which sport to participate in, they should not have the option of not doing any sport. This is because physical activities are important and should be a part of everyone’s daily routine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d be rightly so, others feel every child has to choose whether or not to particip...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...others feel every child has to choose whether or not to participate. My opinion is that ever...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ldren should partake in activities that are pleasing to them, instead of wasting time doing ...
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Line 5, column 574, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... away last week from a condition related to sedentary living. To conclude,alth...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , although
...ted to sedentary living. To conclude,although children should be given the chance to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, while, as for, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05154639175 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82415274657 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615120274914 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.4833271559 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304759371793 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833069300762 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075244153778 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178971363022 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749185791901 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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