People believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children,while others feel it should be purely optional.
Many schools have implemented compulsory physical activities as part of their curriculum. while some individuals believe it should be rightly so,others feel every child should choose whether or not they would like to participate. My opinion is that every child should be exposed to some form of sport to encourage the habit of exercising. This essay will discuss my opinion and also,why people may think every child should be given a choice instead of being forced. 55
One of the reasons why some individuals may feel sports should be optional is some children are bad at sports and can unnecessarily get injured doing it. They believe that the child should partake in activities that are pleasing to them,instead of wasting time doing what they dislike. An example is a secondary school classmate of mine who was forced to join the football team,he not only played terribly and caused his team to lose but also ended up getting injured. The injury was so severe he required admission at a federal hospital in our community where he received treatment for 2 weeks. 96
However,the importance of mandatory sports is to encourage the habit of exercising in the young. unless these activities are forcefully included,most young people do not exercise. They spend most of their time in front of electronic devices watching tv and playing video games all day. In a recent research conducted by university of Michigan,results show a significant increase in the number of obese children. The inactivity of children has led to many dying from weight related conditions. A sad victim was my neighbor, uche, who passed away last week from a condition related to sedentary living .
To conclude,although children should be given the chance to pick which sport they should participate in,they should not have the option of not doing any sport. This is because physical activities is very important and should be a part of everyone’s daily routine.
- In many countries crime is increasing what are the main reason for this?What can be to improve this situation 61
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- Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of education from primary school to tertiary education should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion. 78
- The graph shows the number of enquiries received by a tourist information office of a city over a 6 months period in 2011. 73
- The government should spend money on encouraging children to take part in arts and sports rather than supporting sport activities and artistic performance by general public.To what extent do you agree or disagre. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9036841569 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8632262131 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266089728439 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776056134767 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567337021421 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161247442463 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626999308815 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.