Companies should encourage employees who work in a high position to leave at the age of 55 in order to give opportunities to the new generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that the companies give a job opportunities to the new generation. While, some concur that employee who work for long period of time should encourage them to leave at the age of 55. However, I partially agree with given statements and I believe that the younger and elder employees both are important forms of experience and state of the arts technologies.
To commence with the first notion, There are myriads things to be shared in its favour first and foremost , mindset of young people are more flexible and adept to new things and innovation. As a result, the younger people are aware of the new technologies because they are much technophile. In contrast, some older people are technophobes. Moreover, elder people are also well experience mind but can not grasp power a latest thing and they work according to the set of minds. Alternatively, the business would be dramatically declined because of the core value of elder generation without experience. Hence, if business could be widely increase then the needs of right combination in younger and older generation.
Shifting towards the second school of thought the elder employee retire the age of 55 year. Therefore, so many people get retire is impact and burden faced in our ministry to support of the pension retirement. Furthermore, In government has negative impact of the economy. Thus, the regime has decided to tax would be rise in the society. So it is totally repercussion in our economy.
In Recapitulation, the elder and young employee are crucial beneficial to the companies, elder employee never retirement in age of 55 but to encourage that to work in with own interest based in companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01052631579 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01498369093 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564912280702 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8919383101 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210822548463 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643500683126 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867296390005 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140287727693 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118082554799 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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