Young people these days tend to be less polite and respectful than in the past. Causes and solutions.
Recently, I read an article about how contemporary community is different from the older one. It is said that there are many reasons why modern society shows the disrespect and discourtesy to older people. In this essay, I will consider the main reasons and possible solutions to deal with this problem.
let us start with reasons that create the problem with the disrespectful and impolite behavior of younger generation. The first reason is that they tend to stop following past traditions. Youngsters tend to refuse following the tradition of being respectful and polite for older people, since they think that they are both more intelligent and aware of the modern world. Another factor is that they are fascinated in the Internet than in things of the past. Growing generations find the virtual world more interesting than national customs, but it does not teach them to regard older population, because it is more oriented on modern society.
However, some politicians suggest the following solutions to handle this problem. Firstly, to deal with this problem, parents should teach children to respect older generations. Parents should take larger responsibility for teaching their children to show more respect to older member of society, as children usually listen to both parental advice and lessons. Secondly, the government also can launch cultural programs for young people. Authorities should boost cultural awareness in the country by arranging various social occasions, since it has sufficient finances as well as administrative resources to organize such expensive events.
In conclusion, even though there are many reasons that influence young people to stop from being polite and respectful, I think that it is possible to address this complication, if people take the above mentioned solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41901408451 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78494861745 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5219885692 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.928571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155521837597 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503423618513 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062001030814 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978464979302 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080563435297 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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