You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home.
Write a letter to the council. In your letter
say how you heard about the plan
explain how you feel about it
ask for more information about it
Dear councilor,
I am writing in regard to the new shopping mall that is being built in my neighborhood. This morning I discovered this news on the poster right in front of the playground. At first I did not believe my eyes, but as soon as I check it out online, I was shocked.
On the poster the developer says that the local citizens will benefit from the new mall, such as low prices for food, boutiques with a large variety of clothing and an electrical goods store. To be honest despite those advantages, I am against it, because they are building the center on the site of our playground. If they complete the construction, the children in my neighborhood will have no area to play in.
If they are going to occupy the current playground, I want to know what they will provide children with as a compensation. On top that, they are going to do with the old trees near the site. As a community, we are opposed to the idea of cutting them down. We think it would be better to plant them in the schoolyard, so that local dwellers will have the opportunity to enjoy them in the sunshine while walking the around the school.
I look forward to your reply as soon as possible, since my neighbors are concerned and doubtful about these possible advantages.
Yours faithfully,
Tolegen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, well, while, such as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57939914163 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67895744318 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618025751073 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.526833358 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9166666667 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0784870208236 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290311401385 0.0766984524023 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323105098877 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0467563452122 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319091556935 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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