You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home.
Write a letter to the council. In your letter
say how you heard about the plan
explain how you feel about it
ask for more information about it
Dear councilor,
I am writing in regard to the new shopping mall that is being built in my neighborhood. This morning I discovered this news on the poster right in front of the playground. At first I did not believe my eyes. However as soon as I check it out online, I was shocked.
On the poster the developer says that the local citizens will benefit from the new mall. For example, they are suggesting low prices for food, boutiques with a large variety of clothing and an electrical goods store. To be honest despite those advantages, I am against it, because they are building the center on the site of our playground. If they complete the construction, the children in my neighborhood will have no area to play in.
I want to know what they will provide children with as a compensation if they are going to occupy the current playground. Otherwise, they merely deprive our children of childhood. On top that, they are going to do with the old trees near the site. As a community, we are opposed to the idea of cutting them down. In fact, we think it would be better to plant them in the schoolyard, so that local dwellers will have the opportunity to enjoy them in the summer while walking around the school.
I look forward to your reply as soon as possible, since my neighbors are concerned and doubtful about these possible advantages.
Yours faithfully,
Tolegen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...nd. At first I did not believe my eyes. However as soon as I check it out online, I was...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, well, while, for example, in fact, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6693877551 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69822160569 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608163265306 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7472011593 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2666666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0772287349953 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255843332132 0.0766984524023 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306969806561 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477603111866 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325636804449 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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