Travelling to study is over-rated. We have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really necessary for tertiary studies?
The influence of local studied against travel for tertiary studies which was always debatable has now become more controversial. The influence of brilliant scholars has sparked over the controversial impacts of this trend on travelling to study be over-rated in recent years. It can be agreed that for some families a better option is to leave their children to travel abroad to study. Therefore, this essay will elaborate how good quality of local study is important and how people can enjoy this option without losing a brilliant scholar and thus lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there some reasons why people do not travel abroad to study, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that rich countries have invested in school quality. As an illustration, a University of Adelaide study has shown that 78% of people who chose to travel abroad felt unhappy because though their local school and universities are better than other countries. Therefore countries as India, Sri Lanka and other in South America said that travel to developed coutries help students to improve their language skills and also give more experience related to business and life.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which might overwhelm the substantial influence if travel is really necessary for tertiary studies, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact is that it really matter. For instance, students who never travel can experience another culture and know different habits. Hence tertiary studies are low developed to become brilliant students.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the importance of travelling is distinguished, although travel abroad helps anyone and never should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27956989247 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72015383866 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8307968151 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.909090909 104.977214359 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401566826663 0.242375264174 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152589527969 0.0925447433944 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862988621682 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226047395801 0.151781067708 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111322129196 0.0609392437508 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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