TOPIC: Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe it is getting easier. Discuss both views & give your own opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether city life is becoming less easy or whether living in big cities is getting less demanding. While I understand why some people support to the former view, I am in favor of the latter.
I understand why people believe that it is getting more challenging to live in big cities. From their point of view, big cities have a large immigrant population which leads to overpopulation. As a result, there will be an increase in life demands. Consequently, citizens have to face high living cost and they find it difficult to make ends meet. Another point to be made is that growth of personal vehicles such as automobiles, motorbikes,… results in daily traffic congestion. This causes increased pollution because of exhaust fumes. The bad thing about it is that city dwellers will be damaged the respiratory system or even lung diseases if they go out without masks.
Nevertheless, I still side with those who believe that city life is becoming easier. This is due to the fact that cities have many medical centers which are opened 24 hours a day, have modern facilities and employ well-trained medical staff. This allows citizens to receive timely treatment. Thanks to this, they can ensure their health. Another reason to be given is that the big cities have various means of transport such as buses, subways, taxies,… which help people can easier travel around the cities or other countries. Therefore, city dwellers can not only have many different ways to get to work or school but also they can make vacation plans by quickly booking transportations in advance.
In conclusion, despite acknowledging why some people think that living in the big cities is becoming more demanding. I hold the belief that it is getting less difficult.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'living'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: living
...eve that it is getting more challenging to live in big cities. From their point of view...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...vehicles such as automobiles, motorbikes,… results in daily traffic congestion. Th...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...transport such as buses, subways, taxies,… which help people can easier travel aro...
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Line 5, column 571, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...refore, city dwellers can not only have many different ways to get to work or school but also ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98316498316 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73140145561 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582491582492 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.111025894 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0588235294 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290311229225 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896865307358 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092693562346 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200569189612 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055357165142 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.