Parents and teachers make many rules for children to encourage good behaviour and protect them from danger. However, children would benefit from fewer rules and greater freedom.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is the fundamental duty of the parents and teachers to help their children evolve into responsible person. I personally agree that children cannot be given a total rule-free atmosphere and freedom.
To begin with, children are innocent as compared to mature person and they have no idea about good or bad things so it is the duty of the parents and teachers to become their child disciplined and educate them about all things. Moreover,parents and teachers make rules so that children are secure and concentrating more upon the tasks. It also helps the children to become better human beings. For instance parents and teachers guide pupils so that they give better performance academic and socially.
Moving further,they also guide their pupils so that they can prevent them from some evils in the society. For example bad society have more impact on children like some children are using cigarette,drugs and drinks and also they encourage other children to take drugs, drinks etcetera.
On the other hand,some people who opine that parents and teachers would give fewer rules and greater freedom because today children do not like the interference of other person and they also like to live their life independently.
In gist, I would like to say that parents and teachers make many rules so that their children became more disciplined and also they protect their child from bad things.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
No. of Words: 234 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
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The essays are great! You only need to put more contents. for example:
'On the other hand,some people who opine that parents and teachers would give fewer rules and greater freedom because today children do not like the interference of other person and they also like to live their life independently.'
This is too simple. Need some more arguments.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 234 350
No. of Characters: 1140 1500
No. of Different Words: 118 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.911 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.872 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.332 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 53 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 13 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.375 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.464 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.722 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.177 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
It is the fundamental duty of the parents and teachers to help their c...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , parents
... educate them about all things. Moreover,parents and teachers make rules so that childre...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...academic and socially. Moving further,they also guide their pupils so that they ca...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , drugs
...n like some children are using cigarette,drugs and drinks and also they encourage othe...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...s, drinks etcetera. On the other hand,some people who opine that parents and teach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6199792204 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513043478261 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1298494564 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317695465921 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136669328646 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605031913755 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195187534951 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374291983144 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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