Most countries allow 18 years old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while other think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In many countries, people at the age of 18, allowed to driving four-wheeler. One group of people is in favor of this view, whereas other group believe the age of starting a car drive is 25. Both view-points are discussed further before state my opinion.
To begin with, According to study structure, the average age for staring college is around 18. Thus, during that time period students need proper transportation and car is a more convenient option when accommodation are far from college or university. By use of public transportation, people have to wait for a long time to avail it because the schedule are varies from college time. Moreover, at the age of 18, youngsters are enough mature to take responsibility. Young people who want to do a full-time or part-time job whose financial condition is weak, they can get an employment by cab driving in the city.
On contrary, some people suggested that, 25 is the best age to start a car driving. People with the age of 18 are very aggressive and immature to drive a four-wheeler. They are fond of speed and race with other vehicle. As a result, the cases of road accidents in the metro cities increasing at the speed of light. Furthermore, in difficult situation on the road people of 25 age are more vise as compare to the age of 18. For instance, in the situation of break down of car, if one have a basic knowledge about car repairing they can check the fault. Also, sometimes they make it proper by them self.
In conclusion, my opinion is, car driving should be started at the age of 25 because it reduces the accidents count, as well as traffic rules and regulation follow properly on the road as compare to the people of age 18.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59405940594 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75518066344 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.759456191 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330545500897 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110888203477 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961224210341 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236802749687 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995426787725 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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