Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
In today's competitive world, how important it is to look through the issues of life and solve them with best optimum solution.Ostentatious problems can be solved with the help of many available suggestions from public. On the other hand, solutions to scandals are difficult to find as they are not discussed publicly or addressed in chorus.
In the world full of corruption and depravity, thousands of cases occur daily which can instigate public disgrace.Political reforms and some governmental schemes to reduce the effect of monetary scandals prove to be futile. As a citizen, we should be aware of malpractices flourishing in one's country. People working in agricultural and industrial sector face the wrath of such monetary scandal during bad harvest season. Many affluent political figures get exculpated from the scandal by bribing the judicial body.
Many heinous crimes are also made opaque to general public to avoid chaos. To illustrate the fact, I would like to give one example. In largely populated country such as India, many crimes including rapes, murders and kidnapping are not reported in fear of disgrace or in misunderstanding that no action would be taken.But one incident in December 2012 shook the nation and coerced the public to put forth the issue of rape, molestation and murder.That crime led to national as well international public outrage.
Scandals associated with sports are often covered by the national sports committee to protect the reputation of sportsperson involving in it.For example, recently 2 renowned batsman of Australian Cricket Team- Steve smith and David Warner were involved in ball tampering during Autralian tour for Test match. Since the news was spread throughout the social media, people were aware of occurence of such malpractice, which led to an outrage and coerced Australian board to suspend them for a period of 2 years. Whereas in early years of cricket, no serious action would have been taken for such an act.
On a concluding note, discussion and dissemination of different scandals is important to make public aware and invigorate them to be cautious in engaging any such activities which can invite public disgrace and contempt.Stricter rules for violation of canons should be made to attenuate the rate of occurence of such acts in coming years.
- The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves. 66
- The following appeared in a memo from the director of student housing at Buckingham College."To serve the housing needs of our students, Buckingham College should build a number of new dormitories. Buckingham's enrollment is growing and, based o 42
- Fifteen years ago, Omega University implemented a new procedure that encouraged students to evaluate the teaching effectiveness of all their professors. Since that time, Omega professors have begun to assign higher grades in their classes, and overall stu 29
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. 16
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...rough the issues of life and solve them with best optimum solution.Ostentatious problems ...
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Suggestion: Ostentatious
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Suggestion: Political
...ily which can instigate public disgrace.Political reforms and some governmental schemes t...
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Suggestion: one's
...be aware of malpractices flourishing in ones country. People working in agricultural...
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...rstanding that no action would be taken.But one incident in December 2012 shook the...
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...e issue of rape, molestation and murder.That crime led to national as well internati...
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...utation of sportsperson involving in it.For example, recently 2 renowned batsman of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, whereas, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27150537634 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01707645212 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604838709677 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.309911759 60.3974514979 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.846153846 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6153846154 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0702601272868 0.243740707755 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268062778501 0.0831039109588 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025127131738 0.0758088955206 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.039745351188 0.150359130593 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229956403796 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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