You visited a theatre last week with your friend. Your friend had a small accident . Write a letter to the manager of the theatre
Explain the accident
How a staff helped
How can the manager make sure nothing of this sort happens again?
Dear Sir,
I am writing to draw your attention towards the inconvenience by a broken chair in your theatre.
I have been to your theatre along with my friend to watch Quiet Place movie , and we noticed that the chair where my friend is being seated was not in a good condition even after paying a huge amount for ticket comfortable seats were not provided and I have informed the same to your staff. They said that it would be changed for the next show. As we started watching the movie all of a sudden my friend chair was suddenly half broken and she had a minor injury and due to this other audience in the theatre were also disturbed .
One of your staff nearby has been very helpful to us at that moment by providing us with comfortable seats after the incident. I am glad that it was just a minor injury to my friend.
Taking this incident into consideration we request you to know that comfort of the audience should be your prime thought and make sure that this kind of incident would not take place again.
Yours faithfully,
Kalyani.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ith my friend to watch Quiet Place movie , and we noticed that the chair where my ...
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Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of a sudden my friend chair was suddenly half broken and she had a minor injury ...
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Line 4, column 463, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... half broken and she had a minor injury and due to this other audience in the th...
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Line 4, column 530, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ience in the theatre were also disturbed . One of your staff nearby has been v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50520833333 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32851090058 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8544469235 44.8134815571 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.125 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234386570698 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967316660885 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462177283364 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1353647012 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152015184331 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.