Wheather authorities in power should take responsibility to look after the old people or not has become a vexatious issue, in this present day and age. This worrisome matter deserves an urgent attention. In my opinion, both authorities that is family and government should take care of the elder people. I will justify my viewpoints in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, on priority, families must be responsible to cater to the needs of their old family members. This can be done by giving them quality time, and by taking care of their needs and requirements. This is due to the fact that families are closely related to their elder ones, they have blood relation with each other. How they can send their elders in age care centers? It is the matter of shame. If elders can support their children in every situation, whether in financial or emotional, then how children can forget to give support back to them when older have need of it. Families should provide all day care facilities though these are medical services or financial services. Old people are like the shadow of a tree, resulting they impart wisdom to their children and grandchildren. So, to realize them that they are the valuable part of the house, families should look after them.
On the other hand, there can be certain situations, when government has to take care of old people. Firstly, when old people are pushed by their family members to move to the age care centers, then government should take responsibility of old person. A simple reason behind this, they are unwanted and neglected at homes due to bad behavior of family members. The close relatives of older persons do not have enough time to talk with their parents due to modern and busy lifestyle. Government should provide them age care homes so that they can live their life with like-minded people, and can enjoy their moments of life upto some extent. An another situation, when old parents do not have anyone to take care of them in their hardships. At this time government should give assistance to them. Therefore, due to later reasons authorities in power must give a hand to help old people.
In conclusion, it is sensible to say that, although families should take the first priority to take care of their elders, yet in some situations government can also support the old people in take care of them. On the one hand, families can spend quality time with them, on the other hand, government can provide them medical facilities and better professional care through age care centers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, so, then, therefore, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 7.85571142285 280% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2118.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 436.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85779816514 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55369901747 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447247706422 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7347147861 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0869565217 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9565217391 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65217391304 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306629816529 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987174562417 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839698905689 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215420300922 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118998503721 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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