In some countries, the number of people who visit art galleries is decreasing. What are the reasons for this? How can we solve this problem?
Art in a country depicts its tradition, culture and heritage. In most developing countries, there is a falling trend in number of art galleries and people who are interested in them. Negligence of governments, lower budgets and decreasing interest among youth are few main reasons for these disappointing numbers. These major issues along with their solutions shall be analyzed in this essay.
As mentioned above, one of the major factors is negligence and lower budgets for arts industry by the governments. This abandonment of arts for providing better basic life facilities is quite clear and understandable among countries with lower GDP. To state this fact it was noted that most developing third world countries like Pakistan spend only less than 1 percent of their total annual budget on arts and entertainment industry. Another factor that affects and accentuates this situation is decreasing interest in arts. That is due to lower salaries and no incentives being provided by arts industry or government as compared to its counterparts science and business industries. A recent study showed almost 50% of artists have to take up another job as well, to make their both ends meet. All this has resulted in lesser art and revenue for art galleries leading to lesser promotion of their events and in turn lesser people showing up for them.
Solutions to above given problems are self explanatory. For the first issue, governments should realize that art and culture are almost equally important for a country as are science and business. Governments should increase budget for arts, entertainment and film industry promoting them to provide quality products that would surely benefit their country and its economy in the longer run. Similarly, the second problem can be curtailed by making laws that make sure that artists get their income as high as scientists, doctors and engineers. This would ensure that students interested in arts do not have to shun their dreams of being artists just for the sake of better earning.
In conclusion, governments' attitude of looking down upon arts along with no proper incentives and benefits for people of this profession have led to downfall of arts and cultural sovereignty of developing countries. Steps should be taken by governments as well as art industries and lovers of art to make sure that art does not eventually die off in their countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, similarly, so, third, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15601023018 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76202756201 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539641943734 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2354146057 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7222222222 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263765201691 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880363667215 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606465829715 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179461218377 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293431009737 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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