Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is undeniable that having friends is a popular topic that has caused heated debate over a long period since it affects everybody in his/her daily life. Depending on personal experience, personality type, and emotional concern, people differ greatly in their attitudes towards this issue. We found out that some people agree it is more important to keep your old friends than making new ones. On the contrary, others disagree and prefer to make new friends. From my point of view, I absolutely agree with this statement. There exist countless factors that influence this opinion. Three of those are promoting criteria, being supportive, and being honest.
The main aspect to point out is that making friends is getting harder as I grow up. Every year, I become older and develop my criteria to opt for a person as a friend. This difficult process leads me to maintain my old friends and try not to lose them.
A furthermore subtle point is that my friends showed me how much they are amazing and supportive. being advocated is my key criterion. I remember the day that I broke up with my boyfriend and I was so sad so my friend changed my mood by taking me to the zoo. They know me well so they know that I am crazy about the lions.
Finally, yet important, I have honest and frank friends. When we go shopping I presumably ask them about the dresses that I select to buy because if the dresses are not beautiful, they invariably tell me.
From what has been discussed above, we may finally reach the conclusion that new friends may be nice but old friends are golds, so who wants to lose a giant chest of golds?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Being
...w much they are amazing and supportive. being advocated is my key criterion. I rememb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, may, so, well, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 290.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61724137931 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47024865521 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2215359863 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7647058824 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.046437682859 0.236089414692 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0167982305149 0.076458572812 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330123357924 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0221668480662 0.150856017488 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296331565074 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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