A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend to thank him for the invitation, explain the reasons why you can't come and ask him about others time to visit
Dear Rudyard,
Thank you so much for your invitation. It’s a really generous offer to put me up at your place at Tokyo. I would have really liked to come and it’s very kind of you but unfortunately I won’t be able to make it due to my hectic work schedule.
I’ve just started a new teaching job, and I’ve been working around the clock. It’s been intense! I don’t mean to complain; I’ve been enjoying it immensely and the school I’m working at is actually our old high school, which has been a lot of fun. Do you remember Mrs Brown? She’s actually my supervisor.
Could you let me know of another time I can visit? Because of the school holidays I’ll be free in the new year and I’ll also be free in winter so if you’re available then, I’d certainly love to escape the cold to visit you.
I can’t wait to hear from you.
Your friend,
Rafsun.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Rudyard, Thank you so much for your invitation. I...
^^^
Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... wait to hear from you. Your friend, Rafsun.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so, then, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80745341615 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68213688346 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67701863354 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.61843813 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3636363636 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162699405523 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966713144517 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849843740539 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116981742233 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599441161264 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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