Gone are the days, when people used to eat only the homemade food. But, in this present day and age, eating tastes and preferences get changed, considerably. Some individuals love to the foods which is prepared at home, whereas other likes to eat at fast food joints or in multi-cuisine restaurants. It has always been a question, what exactly drive to the people to eat foods at home, or in restaurants. In my opinion, home meals are the best option, and I will justify my view points in the subsequent paragraphs.
At the outset, due to various considerations, i agree that home meals are the best. Predominantly, homemade food is highly hygienic than the outside food. A simple reason behind this, the person who prepares meals at the home, give a proper attention towards the ingredient's freshness. Moreover, it is prepared under the good conditions, and at cleanliness place. These things make it more clean to eat and digest rather than the restaurant food. Another reason, food which makes at home has enough nutritious. It has balanced vitamins, and suitable oils according to the requirement of body. While, the restaurant food does not have balanced diet. Thus, due to adequate nutritionals, and having a balanced diet, one should always prefer homemade food.
Due to another vexatious issue, one should not give a priority to restaurant food. It is due to the fact that, eating much restaurant food is a signal to various fatal diseases. A simple reason behind it is that, this food is loaded with high saturated and unsaturated fats, which can not be digested easily. Consequently, people who are eating on food points, would face heartburn, insomnia, and problems related with blood pressure. On the other hand, homemade food has a love of mother, and wife which makes it more delicious, and it also give a chance to the family to sit close to each other, resulting smooth relationships. Hence, homemade food is the best to eat.
In conclusion, I strongly recommended that an individual should be given preference to his healthy body, not to taste of tongue. It would be propitious to say that easy digesting, high amount of nutrients, and love and affection makes a food to healthy diet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Gone are the days, when people used to eat only ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... outset, due to various considerations, i agree that home meals are the best. Pre...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ingredients'' or 'ingredient's'?
Suggestion: ingredients'; ingredient's
...me, give a proper attention towards the ingredients freshness. Moreover, it is prepared und...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s according to the requirement of body. While, the restaurant food does not have bala...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... homemade food has a love of mother, and wife which makes it more delicious, and ...
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Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...ch makes it more delicious, and it also give a chance to the family to sit close to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ngue. It would be propitious to say that easy digesting, high amount of nutrients...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...nutrients, and love and affection makes a food to healthy eating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94878706199 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80357140833 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.026636382 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4545454545 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8636363636 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.40909090909 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289630607072 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878552860804 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647953262384 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168986374596 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928232761279 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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