You recently bought a jacket, but when you got home, you discovered it was damaged. When you took it back to the store, you were told that merchandise cannot be returned.
Write a letter to the store manager. In your letter
Describe the problem with the jacket.
Explain what happened when you tried to return it.
Say what you would like the manager to do.
I am writing to tell you about a faulty jacket I bought from your store recently. Although your staff did not agree to hear me about the issue, I would like you to exchange the product.
I am disappoint to narrate that the jacket has two holes near the left hem. I did not notice them while buying at your shop.
As soon as I came to see the holes, I went to your shop and informed the matter to one of your staff members. However, he refused to listen to me and responded in an extremely rude way. I think this kind of attitude with customers can cause damage to your business since it relies on them.
I will not wear this damaged jacket nor will keep it to me so I would like you to exchange it with another jacket having no fault. In case of failure, I would like you to refund me the full cost of the item.
I would appreciate your prompt response in the matter. I look forward to having your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Sayed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disappointed'.
Suggestion: disappointed
...ike you to exchange the product. I am disappoint to narrate that the jacket has two hole...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... your reply. Yours faithfully, Sayed.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, while, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19337016575 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18554206573 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591160220994 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2189923723 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.25 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204569576222 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720092294392 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704857433415 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105111674873 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846353181453 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.43 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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